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Name : Malcolm Montgomery Email : Montgomery1@btopenworld.com 
Location : Glasgow, Scotland Date : 29/08/2002

THE LOST PRINCESS

A long time ago in the land of Montini, the royal family were attending the coronation of Prince Julian, who lived in the neighbouring kingdom of Lalia. The celebrations were very special to one member of the Montini royal family, Princess Menezza, who was destined to become Julian’s bride.
The Montini royal family were returning home from the festivities when King Zacharia suddenly fell ill. Realising that it would take another three days to reach the palace, the royal guards decided that his only chance of survival would be to take a short cut through the forest of Fingusta. This would allow them to reach the palace before dawn.

The guards knew of the terrifying stories told by those who had entered the forest, of thieves and murderers, witches and ghosts. It was true of all the people known to have entered the forest, few had returned safely. Despite their fears, the royal guards knew that unless they took this route, the King would surely die.

The entourage ventured into the forest reluctantly. Surrounded by trees so tall they almost blocked out the sun. The chilling silence only interrupted by the sudden movements of creatures lurking in the undergrowth.

Anxious to reach the safety of Montini, they kept a steady pace through the overgrown carriageways. They continued for several hours when suddenly, the Attacoltians, a barbarian tribe whose evil deeds were legendary throughout Montini, ambushed them. A vicious battle ensued and many a brave knight lost their lives. The horsemen led the Royal Carriages in different directions in order that at least one heir to the Montini throne would have a chance of surviving the attack. The Queen and Prince Marcus headed west; The King and Princess Menezza went east.
The royal guards held their ground and fought courageously, but they were so heavily outnumbered that before long, the last knight was slain.

Realising the reward they could expect from their evil emperor Felix, for the capture of a member of the Montini royal family, the barbarians set off in pursuit of the fleeing carriages.

The Queen and Prince Marcus’s carriage eventually escaped the forest and raced towards the safety of the palace, the King and Princess Menezza’s carriage was not so fortunate. Unable to outrun the barbarians any longer, the royal horsemen made a stand in a desperate attempt to protect their King and Princess but they were no match for the savage Attacoltians.

Realising his fate, the King lowered his daughter into a secret compartment in the floor of the carriage. It was from there she witnessed Felix, the evil Attacoltian emperor thrust his sword into the heart of her father, the King died instantly. Unable to contain her terror, Princess Menezza let out a scream that pierced the deadly silence of the forest. Captured by Felix, Menezza was taken and imprisoned in the castle dungeons of Attacolti.

Meanwhile, in the kingdom of Montini, the Queen and Prince Marcus had sent an army into the forest to look for the King and the Princess. Their search was in vain. They returned with no news, good or bad. As the weeks passed, the Queens’ health began to suffer. With each day, she grew weaker, but refused to give up hope that one day soon she would again see her husband and daughter, sadly it was not to be. On her deathbed, the Queen made a last wish to her son, Prince Marcus. “Search the forest,” she said in a whisper. “Don’t ever give up until you find your father and my lost Princess.” With those words the Queen passed away.

Not long after his beloved mother had died word reached Marcus that the King was dead, and Princess Menezza was being held for ransom in castle Attacolti. To secure her release, Marcus was to renounce his throne and pass his title and kingdom to Felix. If he failed to comply with these demands, the Princess would be executed. Marcus had until the next full moon before his sister would meet her fate.

Princess Menezza lay weeping in her dungeon. The guards took great pleasure in telling her that both her parents were dead, and that if Felix didn’t get his way, she would be hanged. Princess Menezza was very frightened. She knew Prince Marcus would never relinquish his throne; this was his birthright, a legacy their father had died protecting. Knowing this, Princess Menezza could only pray that Prince Marcus would attempt to rescue her, and soon Prince Marcus gathered his War Council. There was no time spare; the next full moon would appear in five days. The citizens of Montini would be told that the Coronation of Prince Marcus would be postponed, and that he would be travelling to Attacolti to negotiate the release of Princess Menezza. He knew that this news would reach Felix and convince him that Prince Marcus intended to bow to his demands.

That night, Prince Marcus put his plan into action. He would once again venture into the Fingusta Forest. If all went well, they would reach castle Attacolti within a few days. Many of the guards were superstitious and feared that if they entered the forest they would share the same fate as their fellow guardsmen had. It was only the strength and determination shown by Prince Marcus that gave them the courage to face their fear. If they were unsuccessful, they would not only lose their Princess, they would loose their kingdom and ultimately – their freedom!

The army had been marching for several hours when they were set upon by a flock of Dragmans, these beastly creatures were half dragon, half man. They could lift a person straight off the ground and carry them away. To where, no one knew, because no one had ever survived or returned after being captured. The guards fought off as many as they could, slaying several of the monsters, but not before many of the Dragmans had succeeded in securing their prey. Then as suddenly as they had arrived, they were gone. The terrifying screams of the captured soldiers echoed through the forest, fading until the eerie silence of the forest returned.

The soldiers that were left regrouped and carried on nervously edging deeper into the forest. As darkness fell, the army decided to set up camp and rest until daylight. Prince Marcus posted guards to watch over their camp and changed them every hour to ensure that everyone would be fully rested by morning.

It was very cold in the forest and Marcus was finding it difficult to sleep. Suddenly, he thought he could hear something moving in the bush. Lying very still, he stretched out an arm and reached for his sword, it was gone! At that moment a guard raised the alarm. It was too late, Snatchers had raided the camp, a tribe who lived in the trees and survived by stealing from anyone who entered the forest.

Their approach was so silent and effective; they rarely ever came into conflict with their victims. When they did, they were able to escape through the trees, knowing that the armour-laden soldiers would not be able to pursue them.

This time though, one of the Snatchers was not so lucky. In a vain attempt to flee, the Snatcher had become entangled in the heavy undergrowth and was soon captured. Marcus was surprised at the sight of the Snatcher; it was small and very dirty. He was even more shocked to discover that this Snatcher was in fact a girl. When spoken to, she stubbornly refused to give her name or explain her actions. Prince Marcus decided that he could use her to guide his army through the forest, so he gave her the name Dusty and instructed her to show them the quickest way out of the forest. In return, Prince Marcus would release her when they reached Attacolti. Realising she had no choice, Dusty pointed out the quickest and safest way.

Once again Prince Marcus and his army set off through the forest. The more time Prince Marcus spent with Dusty, the more her grew to like her. It wasn’t long before he persuaded her to talk. She explained that the Snatchers fled from a small village just outside Attacolti. They had been invaded by the Attacoltians, those that had managed to escape had been living in the forest ever since.
Prince Marcus assured Dusty that if the Snatchers came to Montini, they could once again live normally and freely. There would be no need to steal or live in the trees like animals. Although they had only known each other for a matter of hours, Dusty could see that Prince Marcus was a man of his word. She admired his honesty and courage, she also thought he was very handsome!
It was almost mid-day by the time Prince Marcus and his army reached the edge of the forest. Far in the distance they could see Attacolti castle. It was so huge it seemed to reach up through the clouds. At that moment, Prince Marcus gave Dusty the opportunity to return to her people and assure them that they could start a new life in Montini. Dusty smiled, wished him luck, and disappeared back into the forest.

Prince Marcus, accompanied by six of his guards set off towards the castle. The army would follow a short distance behind them, carefully keeping out of site. Once he had secured Menezza’s release, Prince Marcus would give his army the signal to attack.

Before long, Prince Marcus and his soldiers reached the castle gates, where they were escorted into a great hall. It was here that Prince Marcus came face to face with Felix for the first time. The atmosphere was very tense and Prince Marcus let it be known that until Princess Menezza was released and allowed to leave the castle under the escort of his soldiers, he would not concede to Felix’ demands. The evil emperor agreed, although he made some conditions. In exchange, Prince Marcus was to remain in the castle and would be released when the Attacoltians had taken control of the kingdom of Montini. Felix would then allow the citizens of Montini safe passage to Lalia.
Prince Marcus was wise, he knew that Felix had no intention of releasing him or allowing his people to leave Montini safely. As soon as the Attacoltians reached Montini, they would kill everyone and burn the city to the ground. Prince Marcus hid his fears and decided to go along with Felix’ plan. Only when he could be certain that Princess Menezza was out of harms way, would he alert his army.

Prince Marcus was then escorted down to the dungeons. Knowing that he had no time to loose, he suddenly made a lunge for one of the guard’s swords. The stone stairwell soon echoed with the sound of sword striking sword. Prince Marcus was a skilled and fearsome warrior, and was soon standing victorious over the bodies or the four slain barbarians. He carefully made his way to the top of a turret and signalled for his army to attack the castle.

A vicious battle began. The Montini soldiers found it difficult to penetrate the castle’s defences; they had to consider a retreat in order to avoid certain defeat.

Suddenly, a great army emerged from the forest; it was King Julian of Lalia. He had heard of Felix’ evil plan and knew that if he was to succeed in capturing the throne of Montini, it would only be a matter of time before he made an attempt to invade Lalia. As a fierce battle raged outside the castle, Prince Marcus was searching everywhere for Felix. He was nowhere to be found. He was almost ready to give up when Felix emerged from the shadows of the Throne Room. Without warning, he caught Prince Marcus off guard and thrust his sword deep into his shoulder. Prince Marcus reeled away in agony he could barely stand and was in no position to defend himself. As Felix struck again and again, Prince Marcus could feel himself getting weaker and weaker, until he could no longer raise his sword. With a vicious swipe, Felix knocked the sword from Prince Marcus’s grasp. Taking a step forward, a cunning grin etched on his face, Felix raised his sword above his head, pausing briefly to tell Prince Marcus “It was I who killed your father!” he exclaimed. “And it is with as much pleasure that I take your life too.” Unable to move, Prince Marcus stared past his tormentor. Suddenly, Felix let out an excruciating gasp. With a look of disbelief in his eyes, he dropped to his knees and fell forward to reveal an arrow sunk deep into his back. Felix was dead. Prince Marcus, weak and bloody, strained to focus on the figure emerging from the shadows, crossbow in hand; it was Dusty. She gently helped the Prince to his feet and guided him through the dark corridors of the castle until they reached the outer walls. Prince Marcus could scarcely believe his eyes when he looked down from the towers at the raging battle below.

The sight of King Julian’s army powering through the ranks of the Attacoltians was breathtaking. At the heart of the battle, King Julian could be seen. Sword in hand he surged towards the castle gates, slaying every barbarian who stood in his path.

It wasn’t long before the battle was won and King Julian’s army secured the castle.

Marcus and Julian returned home to a hero’s welcome. The people of Montini lined the streets singing and dancing to celebrate the victory.

Prince Marcus was now free to take his place on the throne of Montini, and what a fine King he would be. He held a magnificent banquet in celebration of King Julian and Princess Menezza’s wedding. When Menezza, the new Queen of Lalia, threw her bouquet into the jubilant crowd, everyone cheered for the beautiful girl who caught it.

As she emerged from the crowd, Prince Marcus couldn’t believe his eyes; it was Dusty. A flowing gown had replaced the rags she once wore; her long hair glistened in the mid-day sunshine. She truly was the most beautiful woman he had ever seen, he just hadn’t realised until now. He put his arms around her, embracing her softly and gave her a tender kiss.

THE END.

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